Quote (Reaj-Knorg @ 26 May 2011 11:36)
Hammhour had already been translated for an artbook, so it was kept for continuity's sake.... however, there's a Hammer Time joke in the Hammhour Evocation description! **edit: Just been in-game to look, and this spell has evidently been replaced! The Hammer Time joke will therefore be moved to the Hammhour description.
Go Hammer! Go Hammer!
Sacrier's Burning Blood:
not sure, but to me "Boiling Blood" makes more sense to me... as in the phrase "that makes my blood boil" meaning I'm really angry. "burning blood" makes me thing "passionate" (in the pants) rather than angry.
sorry, different thing this time... It's a bit vague. I'd suggest "Nimble" or "Agile" since it provides +dodge, and opposes "Awkward". Skilful could mean anything.
Probably has nothing to do with your parents walking in on you in the middle
. "Clumsy" seems slightly more specific, or at least less ambiguous.
Eniripsa's "Second Birth Mark
": "Rebirth Mark" is less of a mouthful. Or, if you want word play Kar Mark (Karma... as in, the cycle of rebirth)
shows as "Near Death" in the ability-upgrade UI. The State it creates is called Near Death as well. I like "Moribund" as it's a little more distinct.
Clinging to Life:
shows as "Undead" in the ability-upgrade UI. "Impending Death" is the state's name. I'd go for "Cling to Life" as a skill name. Certainly not "Undead" as it's ambiguous with the Zombification state's effects (the heal as harm effect).
shows as "Euthanized" in the upgrade UI. Since Euthanazia is a mercy killing normally... it's not really an "angry" action. "Death Sentence" is good.
shows as "Travel Sickness", and the state is "Transport Sickness"... If the name is supposed to be different from the state, then drop "Transport Sickness" and use one of the other two.
shows as "Overpowerful", with the "Ultra-Powerful" state. "Extra-Vigrrrous" is good. Especially when both "Overpowerful" and "Ultra-Powerful" are very ambiguous with the "Ultra-powerful" Doll created by the Sadida spell Still Life.
keeper" in UI?
a.k.a "Time Stands Still" in UI. Temporal Images sounds better.
Art of Jumble:
or "Kit Skill" in the upgrade UI. Kit Skill is good.
Any reason why it's "Three P.M.", when the other two spells are "Nine A.M." and "Six A.M." ... couldn't it just be "Three o'Clock", "Six o'Clock" and "Nine o'Clock" since it's positions on the clock.
The Profession UI calls it "Lumberjack" but the items call themselves "Forester's Harvests"
For the Trapper Profession, you could probably call items "Trapper's Harvests" to match the naming convention, rather than "Collected by the Trapper" (bit long-winded that).
Bakery items can be "Bread" rather than "Bakery"
Chef items can be "Food" or "Meal" rather than "Gastronomy"
As a side note, the item types "... Harvests
", "... Decorations
", etc seem a bit odd... the items are all singular items (with the exception of boots and "cards" weapons). The "Cards" weapon-type are still mislabelled as "Maps".
slobber/roots/etc"... I think this is supposed to be "Field ..." items, or maybe "Flower ...".
leather/ring/etc" ... These is "Boar leather/etc"
... seriously awesome!
This post has been edited by GoldfishGod - May 28, 2011, 01:16:41.